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The Science Behind Swimming after Eating Urban Legends say that it's unsafe to eat after swimming. However, science can prove it wrong. By the time food is consumed, it takes about four hours to leave the stomach. ***I changed "4" to "four." Remember that anything below the number ten should be spelled out. I removed "the" from the beginning, it just wasn't needed. Also, I changed "eaten" to "consumed." I thought it was a better word to use.; By the time the food is eaten, it takes about 4 hours to leave the stomach. The chances of getting a stomach cramp are rare because muscle cramps are a totally different matter. ***I changed the "is" verb to the plural "are." Since the verb is reflecting the amount of "chances," it should be "are." The same goes for the second "is" after "cramps." And the comma should be removed.; The chances of getting a stomach cramp i...